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i m not dead yet
Contributed by
cant-skate
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Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 01:15:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I m not dead yet
After u slammed my door
I still can breath
I still can feel
I can tell my funny stories
Just like before
If u meant to kill me
Maybe u should have tried even more!
Most of ur lies I never did believe
All of ur words where stolen from a thief
U tried to be for me what she should be
U failed, tried to make me kneel
But u’ll never bend my steel
I not dead yet because the dead cant feel!
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2004-02-03 13:15:36]
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Re: i m not dead yet
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by Lessa on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 01:21:20 PM AEST
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| Very very cool write! |
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Re: i m not dead yet
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by kieran on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 09:00:08 PM AEST
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| love this, it's got a whole 'I will survive' motown feeling to it. I can't say I know how you feel, but it's nice and short, and gets the point across very well. I like it quite a lot! |
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Re: i m not dead yet
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by kieran on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 09:00:13 PM AEST
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| love this, it's got a whole 'I will survive' motown feeling to it. I can't say I know how you feel, but it's nice and short, and gets the point across very well. I like it quite a lot! |
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Re: i m not dead yet
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by kieran on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 09:00:16 PM AEST
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| love this, it's got a whole 'I will survive' motown feeling to it. I can't say I know how you feel, but it's nice and short, and gets the point across very well. I like it quite a lot! |
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Re: i m not dead yet
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by ZooYork_Chick on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 12:53:39 PM AEST
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its cool mun, i dont really no wot else to say, its my first comment hehe. first thing ive liked aswell, so well done...
mooowah
xxx |
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