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I don't need a bra.
Contributed by
chloey
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Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 12:07:37 PM in AEST
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The other girls used to laugh in rhyme,
"Ha Ha, Chloe Solomon.
Where have your breasts gone?"
Is a flat chest a crime?
In THEIR world - NOT MINE.
The other girls used to laugh in rhyme,
"Ha Ha, LOOK at your chest!
Look everyone, Chloe Solomon only needs a vest!"
Is a flat chest a crime?
In THEIR world - NOT MINE.
The other girls used to laugh in rhyme,
"Jeez Chloe Solomon, those are NEVER gonna sprout.
Why the hell don't you pad those tiny things out?"
Is a flat chest a crime?
In THEIR world - NOT MINE.
chloe
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Re: I don't need a bra.
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by sindi-selde on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 12:43:30 PM AEST
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It is lousy when that happens.
Then, when you get them and you don't like wearing a bra, they tease about that!
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Re: I don't need a bra.
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by Lessa on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 12:45:05 PM AEST
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| This is great, it feels like u wrote it just for me, thanks |
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Re: I don't need a bra.
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 01:20:34 PM AEST
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Well, I'm laughing, but not at you.
This is a great little piece.It isn't what is on the outside, it's what is on the inside !!.
Those people who laughed, well they probably have things about themselves that they don't like either.
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Re: I don't need a bra.
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by deadly_blaZe on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 01:24:50 PM AEST
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if only more girls would realize its not a crime and have the attitude that you do... keep your spirits high and dont let them get to you.. dont let them win... kids are cruel and like to tease if it wasnt this theyd find something else.. at least your strong enough to rise above them.. and who wants to have back problems and 2 big midgets holding you back all the time. its not fun.
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Re: I don't need a bra.
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by sugar0986 on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 04:13:31 PM AEST
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| This was a good poem.Unluckily I was cursed with a big chest, I would give anything to be a smaller size again. |
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Re: I don't need a bra.
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by rocken88 on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 09:50:15 PM AEST
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| I liked this. I can really relate to it. keep writing. |
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Re: I don't need a bra.
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by ButchHoward on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 11:21:43 AM AEST
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My first reaction to reading this poem was to sigh and think about how cruel children can be. I love the fact that you see through the pettiness and superficiality of the "other girls." My second thought was: God made you just the way you are and who the hail are they to question His creation? Funny, I haven't seen any high fashion models with big boobs! I think you are much wiser than your years. I also suspect you are probably as beautiful on the outside as you are on the inside. I'm going to print this poem for my daughter, who will soon be facing what you have already experienced. This poem teaches an important lesson -to want what we have and take what we're given with grace. The last line says it all: "In THEIR world - NOT MINE." Great write!
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Re: I don't need a bra.
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by TheGrimReapersHourglass on
Wednesday, 14th November 2007 @ 11:00:07 AM AEST
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| Hello Nice Work Flat Cheasted sounds fun I am a single male 31 caucasion looking for legal caucasion More Human Than Human Thank You From The Grim Reaper,DevilsPriest KnownAs LORD,Dever L. try The Grim Reapers Hourglass-The Grim Reapers(Reepers)Hourglass Rock And Roll Past To Future. |
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