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Through Space in Time
Contributed by
alecfernadez
on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 09:09:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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After the final slice,
The journey resumes
Coldness like spoon fed ice,
Travel to the darkside of the moon
Lights so haunting,
Filled with galactic beauty,
No more memories taunting,
Lived life, this is my reserved bounty
To travel to the furthest star,
See a world so simplistic yet undescribable,
An endless path goes so far,
To a place so infallible
Unspoiled beauty milky way express,
Gas formations so explicitly incredible,
A place for me to be unable to get depressed,
This image is so corporatly sellible
yet its untouched by the finger of mankind,
Hidden and completly unreachable,
Its a secret place in which forever I can hide,
A place so real its un-preachable
Words cannot describe the splender,
Images stay secret in my head,
Images unable to render,
In anything/anyone but the dead
Floating dead and alive in the milky way,
Bad memories, feelings unable to regurgitate,
But sadly I will not be able to stay,
As the doctors begin to ressusitate
Wish I could stay right here,
Wish I was still stone cold dead,
Memories begin to fade with tears,
Memories fade in my hospital bed
Copyright ©
alecfernadez
... [
2004-02-03 09:09:53]
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Re: Through Space in Time
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by Lessa on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 01:05:16 PM AEST
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| this brought tears to my eyes, awsome write! |
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Re: Through Space in Time
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by arden on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 02:56:08 PM AEST
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very sad yet beautifully written. i loved this good work
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