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Walk With Me
Contributed by
Vitreous_Soul
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Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 05:26:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Together, with our hands clasped as one
We'll blaze a trail into destiny
United, our bliss has just begun
We'll forget our pain synchronously
In concert, accompanied by waves
We'll stroll the shore of our sunset beach
Hand in hand, bonded beyond our graves
We'll caress the sky for which we reach
Heart to heart, our love grows very strong
We'll pursue the welkin that is ours
Arm in arm, toward where we belong
We'll find our path mapped out in the stars
Soul to soul, ascend above the haze
We'll be immersed in azure sea
Step by step, the moon is in our phase
We'll walk into eternity
Together, our spirits linked as one
We'll tread this road of destiny
United, we're brighter than the sun
We'll cast off our pain concurrently
All you need to do is walk with me
I promise we'll never look back on yesterday
May our stride eclipse infinity
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Re: Walk With Me
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 06:02:42 AM AEST
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| Wonderful....very delightful.. venkat |
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Re: Walk With Me
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by forever_lonely on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 06:39:15 AM AEST
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OMG dan this is brilliant
This goes straight into my number one slot dude!!!
the imagery and flow the structure everything
this is by far one of your best pieces in my eyes it really is
geat write dude really left me begging for more especially the last line
'May our stride eclipse infinity'!!! amazing!!
Luke |
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Re: Walk With Me
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 07:41:22 AM AEST
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Beautifull, very creative!
Awesome.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Walk With Me
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 04:38:19 PM AEST
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| Another poetic marvel. Oh to have your mind and abilities for one day, that would be my dream. Romantic, touching & beautiful. Kie |
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Re: Walk With Me
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by Queen_Dolly on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 05:08:44 AM AEST
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Nice read, you created beautiful imagery.
Inspirational =)
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Re: Walk With Me
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by PoeticReign on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 05:31:36 PM AEST
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| Very impressive, V.S! Sounds like something i'd write. I'm with Luke -- that last line was stunning! :)
~PR |
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