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Deserts of Life
Contributed by
lovingangel4u
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Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 04:33:42 AM in AEST
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Baron sands is all I see in front of me
I stand void of feeling.
No words of richness can expel my mouth.
My limp body drifting in the vacuum of universe.
Suspended in time
And frozen in space
Void of emotion
Life…not a trace.
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lovingangel4u
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2004-02-03 04:33:42]
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Re: Deserts of Life
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by poet_of_anger on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 07:02:54 PM AEST
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I concur, weird poem, but still nice, thanks for the optical illusion thing also.
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Re: Deserts of Life
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by outsider on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 04:28:15 AM AEST
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| I didnt find this weird, I thought this was an excellent description of loneliness and feeling empty... well thats what I saw in it anyway. Tha gra agam orst mo gradh |
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Re: Deserts of Life
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 02:56:02 AM AEST
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Who said that weird is bad? It's good to be weird.
But... I'm not sure if this poem is weird yet... Whatever it is, it's cool.
Keep writing and take care.
David |
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