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A passionate kiss!
Contributed by
venkat
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Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 03:01:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My longing heart waited for ages
to see your lotus face with beautiful smiles.
My eyes filled with tears of separation
bedimmed with pain and grief.
yonder light fled away like a thief
I was left in a desert of despair of the night
O goddess of love! O my heart's sweet delight!
In my heart I heard your distant calling
and I heard your soft crying
your sweet whispers I heard in my dreams
Through rustling of leaves
through warbling of nightingales,
Awakened from my dreams now
I felt your sweet scented breath
and found my face nuzzling
between your soft lovely breasts;
As I opened my mouth in wonder
and looked at your face so tender
You took a chance then to invade me
with warm lips and your hungry tongue!
Ah, how sweet and delectable is your kiss
As your tongue swirls like a flame of bliss
Inside my mouth and around my tongue!
3-2-2004
Copyright ©
venkat
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2004-02-03 03:01:21]
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Re: A passionate kiss!
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 05:06:05 AM AEST
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| ((((((sweet)))))) |
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Re: A passionate kiss!
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 07:02:09 AM AEST
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Wwwwwooo nnow.
Very pasonate, beautifull, sweet, tender,
Very seneous!
luv, huggs,
emy
Hey thanks friend for your very generous-n-thought provoking comments. |
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Re: A passionate kiss!
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 10:38:15 AM AEST
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| Very passionate this was and beautifully done done! Christina |
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Re: A passionate kiss!
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by Putteragain on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 05:36:51 PM AEST
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A Beauty thats for sure
Michelle |
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Re: A passionate kiss!
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 06:48:55 AM AEST
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WOW Venkat, this was exquisite!! Loved the passion in this..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: A passionate kiss!
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 02:32:28 AM AEST
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Sensual, exciting and passionate as a love like this should be. Written beautifully with grace and wisdom.
Rita |
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Re: A passionate kiss!
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by Hurretje on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 05:15:53 AM AEST
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You really know how to describe the beauty of love, which is a true achievement!
Hur |
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Re: A passionate kiss!
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by Cynthia on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 05:17:24 PM AEST
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| Ooooo Venkat, this is so passionate. I really enjoyed reading this. Stunningly beautiful. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: A passionate kiss!
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 11:25:13 PM AEST
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| im glad you reposted brilliance. =] |
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