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When The Day Is Done
Contributed by
monica109
on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 01:15:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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When the day is done,
the lights begin to fade.
Everything calms down,
the dreams cascade.
When the day is done,
the world becomes a hue.
Soft breezes refresh the soul,
and the mind thinks anew.
When the day ends,
the shadows lift up.
Darkness fills the land,
and new dangers erupt.
When the day is done,
and theres nothing left to play,
all the children head inside to prepare for the new day.
When the day is done,
my thoughts immerse themselves around you.
You are all I can think of,
and I await until I can see you too!
Copyright ©
monica109
... [
2004-02-03 01:15:03]
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Re: When The Day Is Done
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by RochelleLloyd on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 01:30:02 AM AEST
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Hey Girl,
Glad I had a heads up on this one. Lol, I know I'm lame, but I like it just the same.
Love ya
Rochelle |
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Re: When The Day Is Done
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by monica109 on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 01:31:35 AM AEST
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| your not lame i made the meaning hidden to see if anyone really got it. but no one has yet! Keep tryign people this one is deep! |
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Re: When The Day Is Done
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by faith_my_eyes on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 01:35:50 AM AEST
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| May you keep seeming them :) |
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Re: When The Day Is Done
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by lilch4ever on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 02:45:57 AM AEST
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| I really like this one. I'm trying to intruptate it in the way you want . I think I get it a little. But anyways it's still really good. Nice write. Have a nice day :) |
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Re: When The Day Is Done
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by monica109 on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 12:48:54 PM AEST
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| Its about death and when you die what will you do thats what i was thinking when i wrote it anyways |
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