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Roses in her hair
Contributed by
Cobalt
on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 12:37:34 AM in AEST
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Your lips gently caress
as I run my fingers
through your soft hair.
Smile touches your lips
as my hand finds your face.
Loving every second
that you sleep in my arms.
Awoken by a gentle
sunrise that lovingly
kisses your eyes open
to the day that would
start the rest of
our lives together.
'Til death and beyond would
be husband and wife.
Raven's Sin
Copyright ©
Cobalt
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2004-02-03 00:37:34]
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Re: Roses in her hair
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 01:02:46 AM AEST
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| most romantic..very nicely written. venkat |
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Re: Roses in her hair
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 01:15:29 AM AEST
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| So beautifully done,Romantic! Christina |
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Re: Roses in her hair
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by Jolly on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 04:28:55 AM AEST
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hmmmmm. mmmmmmmm Cobalt you say? but inside I sense something softer that wants to get out...this is very nice. I could almost like you...if fighting weren't so much fun.
jolly @};- |
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Re: Roses in her hair
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by norm on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 06:49:18 PM AEST
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Soft and yielding to the eyes
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I think such love by you expressed,
You took the need and you addressed,
But no one here can be too sure,
The girl for you her love endure |
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Re: Roses in her hair
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 05:31:53 AM AEST
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Wow, so beautifull. I'm sure she cherishes this.
Verry good.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Roses in her hair
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 10:23:28 PM AEST
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| very nice Jeff.... soft and beautifully written. |
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Re: Roses in her hair
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 01:44:13 AM AEST
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| great title, sweet mellow poem, *love the dreamy note*, leaves a vivid image in my mind:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Roses in her hair
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by Merry on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 01:15:38 PM AEST
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such a warm love poem - like a soft caress, a gentle kiss - what a romantic guy you are.
smiles
merry |
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Re: Roses in her hair
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 05:22:36 PM AEST
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Jeff!! Is this you?? I can't believe it!! This is one of my favs now..I really love the softness in this.....this is a side of you I haven't seen...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Roses in her hair
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 04:27:09 PM AEST
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Awww this is very romantic! *Shakes head* was getting dreamy :p Amazing poem written with lot of care! The lady who owns your heart is one of the luckiest persons in the world! Beautiful!
Anne :D |
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Re: Roses in her hair
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 08:05:39 PM AEST
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That was a masterpiece! Very well done
Larry |
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