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As The World Fades Away
Contributed by
JadedExistence
on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 11:41:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The world shines bright
Outside my room
But inside is filled with darkness and gloom
Listening to kids laugh
I sit on the bed
I can't understand the thoughts in my head
Just want it to be over
Just want it to end
I think I might have gone over the bend
Swallowing down
All the pills I've got
I end my life, without second thoughts
Never thinking about what I'll miss
I sit back and listen to the music that plays
As I watch the world fade away
Copyright ©
JadedExistence
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2004-02-02 23:41:11]
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Re: As The World Fades Away
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by cryingonmyporch on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 11:56:32 PM AEST
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Awesome poem loved it very very cool.
Amy~ |
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Re: As The World Fades Away
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by Rawkergurl2003 on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 03:33:12 AM AEST
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| great poem. umm ya..its just great. dont know how else to explain it. |
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Re: As The World Fades Away
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by Jolly on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 05:13:13 AM AEST
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| loved the rhyming. Been there done that..only I woke up and then it wasn't so poetic any more..Had to face life for what it it is...B.S, that you rake into a corner until its dried enough to make some use of! LOL. good work! |
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Re: As The World Fades Away
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by Tiffems1 on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 12:18:41 PM AEST
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| The rhyming was good...the poem was good...keep up the good work |
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