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Reflection of Society
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papajfat
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Wednesday, 4th September 2002 @ 03:26:24 PM in AEST
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I'm a bum.......just another whino,
Life seems good, but what the hell do I know.
People stare and they mock my appearance,
A slobbering drunk buying liquor on clearance.
There was a time that I used to care,
But now I'm not all there upstairs.
Being drunk is what works best for me,
I don't need fame or friends or piles of money.
I'm the guy you try not to think about,
I'm at the window when you're dinning out,
Dirty clothes and a blank expression on my face.
I know things that you'll never know,
Inibreation is the only way to go,
You look disgusted, "You're such a disgrace."
There was a time that I used to care,
Not since the day I met despair.
"This turkey's baked," I shout sarcastically,
I don't care what you see when you see me.
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Re: Reflection of Society
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by papajfat on
Thursday, 5th September 2002 @ 08:55:54 AM AEST
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| ok this poem is not about what I said it was, but sex sells |
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Re: Reflection of Society
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by aernby on
Sunday, 8th September 2002 @ 07:22:10 AM AEST
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good stuff
Two clunkers -- blank expression
How bout "Dirty clothes and a blank and beared face.
The other 'gonger', IMHO, is "I shout sarcastically" It sounds wrong, and a wino may use sarcasm but it is unlikely that he'd use the word.
Still, this is good -- what musical genre are you writing for?
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