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I'm Awake
Contributed by
Chanti
on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 08:53:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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This empty feeling,
and nothing more,
im loving it,
its all ive longed for,
to see with shut eyes,
to hear not a sound,
to feel no pain,
when my body falls to the ground,
to drip of all these emotions,
until ive run dry,
until im too gone to fade,
too dead to die,
rip me of my soul,
it means nothing to me,
slowly awakened,
to a dark reality.
Copyright ©
Chanti
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2004-02-02 20:53:28]
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Re: I'm Awake
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 09:36:36 PM AEST
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| very deep and dark, great write, take care Val |
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Re: I'm Awake
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by JadedExistence on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 11:20:28 PM AEST
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Intense and great.
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