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My family...
Contributed by
amandadawn1982
on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 08:37:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Lost by my whole family
Trusted none
Respected one
Guilt for all
One hit, yelled and screamed
One cried
One bit, hit and hurt
One cared
A family of lost cause
Abused by all but one
Unheard by all
Left to die or survive
Two threw angry words
One comforted
One apologized continually
And I died daily
No prefect family
Others claimed
Lost in confusion
But all turned their heads
One disrespected me
Two watched
On threw emotion rips
I felt my demise
I lost, they lost
I survived but not the child
Within me, still dies
Daily with haunting emotions
So take caution
Copyright ©
amandadawn1982
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2004-02-02 20:37:14]
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Re: My family...
(User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 09:31:48 PM AEST
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| This is so very sad, but seems like so many go thru this situation, hope things get better for you, take care Val |
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Re: My family...
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 01:43:57 PM AEST
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Sad but very thought provoking.I enjoyed the read and look forward to more
steve |
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