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Emotions 2

Contributed by hawaii06 on Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 07:39:51 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

It’s weird the way you just pop up in my conversations,
you’re kind of like a bubble.
One second you’re there,
and the next,
“Pop”
you’re no longer there,
and I don’t know what to do.
When you are with me,
I feel as though I have the highest self-esteem,
as well as the highest level of confidence,
but then when you leave,
I feel like a bubble being popped by a pin.
When I talk to you on the phone,
I feel as though I am a brand new pair of shoes,
taken well care of, and fresh, then when you hang up,
I feel like an old, crusty shirt shoved at the bottom of a closet.
Sometimes I feel as though I should go
hide in the closet like a piece of your junk from the 5th grade.
The reason I feel that way,
is because I feel as though that’s the way you treat me.
I know you say it’s not your fault,
but then who’s fault is it?
Who’s the one that disappears?
Who’s the one that treats me like *****?
If it’s not you,
I know who it must be.
I now know that it’s my fault.
I treat myself like *****.

Copyright Â© hawaii06 ... [ 2004-02-02 19:39:51]
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Re: Emotions 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 10:47:33 PM AEST
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powerful realization. i think this needs a better title, and that realization makes this poem creative and original. most people are unable to realize that. now i must get the song pop goes the weasle out of my head =]

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