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To Mr. annonymous
Contributed by
forever_lonely
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Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 07:38:17 PM in AEST
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I open my page, this letter i write
Fulled with emotion, these words use to fight
Strong than you, i am always to be
Your curses and laughs , do nothing to me
You think that your clever, Mr. annonymous
Well guess what i think, your nothing but jealous
The words on my page, make yours fall down to the ground
Hitting so hard, not making a sound
So curse all you want, im not listening to you
Because my poems are loved by many and few
So id tell you to stick it, But that level is low
Im just way to good, that i will never go
So if youd opened your mind, and realised im great
You could have become, a really good mate
You made me feel sad, you left me without hope
So gloomy and lost all i could do is just mope
But then i found courage in all of my friends
They took in my heart and made great amends
They sat there all night, they took all night long
To convince me im good, and your words are so wrong.
Copyright ©
forever_lonely
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2004-02-02 19:38:17]
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Re: To Mr. annonymous
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by hawaii06 on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 07:54:32 PM AEST
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I like this poem...and I think you're wirting is great!!!!! Keep it up!!!!!
Jamie |
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Re: To Mr. annonymous
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 08:22:20 PM AEST
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good vent ...i believe in you
Shari |
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Re: To Mr. annonymous
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 01:05:41 AM AEST
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I'm backing away from the angry poet, walking backward to stay clear of any venom....(Hee-hee!)
Seriously, if your goal in this poem was to sucessfully convey emotion (anger), you achieved the goal. Good work. |
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Re: To Mr. annonymous
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 01:13:19 AM AEST
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| Good vent..but you need not care such anonymous people....blessings aways. venkat |
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Re: To Mr. annonymous
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by DJ_The_Young_Grasshopper on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 02:38:32 AM AEST
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| I wouldn't sweat it. I just noticed that some anonymous guy accused me of plagerism just now. He's probably just doing it to get his rocks off. I'm sure he's just a no-talent ass clown anyway who couldn't write poetry if he tried. |
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Re: To Mr. annonymous
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 02:51:12 AM AEST
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dearest luke, well written expression of feelings, right on too, your a wonderful talented poet, or you wouldnt be gettin' anonys, when i see one on a poem and it is unfit i always comment too, we have to support each other, ...i have had some quite 'colourful' {to put it mildly lol} anonymous comments in my day, some even had to be removed, *just smile* i know when its happening its hurtful if you let them get to you, *puts up her virtual middle finger towards whoever bothered you*, ...on the other hand i have gotten some really lovely ones,
keep writin' hugs n' love nessa
p.s. had to press the anony option, couldnt resist lol x |
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Re: To Mr. annonymous
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 05:49:04 AM AEST
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Damn right! Kick him once for me!
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: To Mr. annonymous
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by EternitysLyre on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 03:45:18 PM AEST
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Never insult the man by which your name may persist throughout history. Namely, the poet, or the writer. The pen can stain the fabric of time far longer than the strands of life will take you.
*grins*
I'm willing to bet you felt lots better after you wrote this, and to Mr. Anonymous:
If you want to insult someone, do it with your name. At least leave an alias, like me.
"Higher and higher the pedestal climbs; Darker and Darker the horror unwinds."
~The Palatine Poet |
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