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Suicide
Contributed by
lildrama04
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Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 06:04:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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They don't even notice me
all they can see is what they
want to see.
Why can't I just do it
It feels like something
Is stopping me for a reason
and it drives me crazy.
Where would I go?
Why would anyone care if
I was to just kill myself right now?
They don't even care if
they are hurting me with all
the things that they say about me.
Why can't I just do it
Why can't I just kill myself and
get it over with.
Why would anybody care
If I was to just
kill myself right now.
Why would anybody care
If I was to leave and
never come back.
Would they be happy
Would they be sad
Who knows anymore
All I know is that
I just don't want to
live anymore.
Why would anybody care
If I was to just go off
and Kill myself.
So this is my final goodbye
Copyright ©
lildrama04
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2004-02-02 18:04:35]
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Re: Suicide
(User Rating: 1 )
by fallen_eyes on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 06:17:16 PM AEST
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| the emotion is really intense, it really captures the reader. you have great skill. :) |
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Re: Suicide
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by Lessa on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 01:15:20 PM AEST
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this peom has tottaly transfixed me
it brought me back to when i was suicidal.
Remeber dear, there is always someone who is ganna miss u, even if u dont know who they are yet, i promise they are there |
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Re: Suicide
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 04:07:17 PM AEST
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| WAIT A MINUTE. HOW DO YOU KNOW IF SOMEONE WOULDN'T CARE IF YOU LEFT? FIRST WHAT ABOUT YOUR FAMILY AND FRIENDS. |
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Re: Suicide
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by norticus on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 10:37:34 AM AEST
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This is the best in the suicide series, although the colored pills one wasn't so bad conceptually.... Anyway, I read it I'll rate it with a 3.3 on the Nortiscale.
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