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Dreamworld Fears
Contributed by
DrEaMeR88
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Wednesday, 4th September 2002 @ 09:09:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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When will I be free
From this chaos I call life,
From this sufocating terror,
From which I try to escape with strife?
When will I be free
From this everlasting pain,
From this overpowering saddness,
From which this dark feeling, I've attained?
What is that shimmering light I see,
From which I see a smiling face,
From which i have no desire to hide,
From which the pain vanishes without a trace?
Could the pain and suffering just disappear?
Or is this a dream where i shall not fear?
Is this real, or just an illusion?
I must venture forth to find a conclusion.
For in a dreamland, i cannot stay.
I will lose track of reality, more and more each day.
So, I must conquer the sadness and pain,
For every dark cloud doesn't always mean rain.
*Danielle*
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DrEaMeR88
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2002-09-04 09:09:36]
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Re: Dreamworld Fears
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by Jackee_line on
Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 10:18:41 AM AEST
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Wow , this is very good,
Well done.
Bravo!! |
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Re: Dreamworld Fears
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by BobbyZimmerman on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 03:53:45 PM AEST
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| Loved the honesty. Excellent job capturing the hopelessness of the situation. Overall, wonderful job! |
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