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Come in, stay away
Contributed by
mercedes
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Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 11:12:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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The sun is shining bright
>no light touches my skin
>The wind blows strong and hard
>no breeze lifts my hair
>Alone in my world i stand
>no one is allowed in
>Occasionally i cry for help
>but when it comes, i shut them out
>Death is in my dreams
>pain is in my life
>Happiness doesnt fit in
>love cannot open the door
>Please stay here with me
>im alone and so afraid
>Please go away, leave me alone
>let me die here in peace
>
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Re: Come in, stay away
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by poetrygodslove on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 11:53:05 AM AEST
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| AWEE now this is beautiful written but it makes me want to cry.. so sad to be alone yet you feel good about being alone cause you dont want anyone to get close and then wow......very good write...sandy and GET OUT OF THE MOOD...SMILE AND JUMP OVER THAT WALL......hehe |
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Re: Come in, stay away
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by L-Dee on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 02:02:35 PM AEST
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| Excellent poem, very emotional and beautifully written |
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Re: Come in, stay away
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by Devnet on
Saturday, 21st February 2004 @ 11:01:03 PM AEST
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| Very good. I love all of the emotional turmoil. It sounds a lot like how I feel most of the time. Keep up the great work! |
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