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16000mg of Ibuprofen
Contributed by
alecfernadez
on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 09:05:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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16000mg of Ibuprofen
40 pills all in all
Wash it down with heiniken
Waltzing down the hall
Dizzy, the lights are too bright,
Two doors instead of one,
Puking and losing my sight,
This slow death isnt fun
Coughing up blood on the floor,
Eyes turn red, nose begins to bleed,
Renal faliure for sure,
No need for PHD degree
Words begin to slur,
Unable to speak,
The world is such a blur,
Feeling kinda weak
Blood pressure begins to fall,
Heart beats fade into a dream,
Collapsing vision of the wall,
Unable to breathe, unable to scream
This pills looked so inviting,
Bright magenta takes my breath,
Didnt know death is frightening,
Frightening it is, I await my death
My head feels so very light,
Cant control my eyes,
Chest is so very tight,
No comfort, not a suprise
1600mg of Ibuprofen,
40 pills all in all,
Wash it down with heiniken,
Collapsing in the hall
Fading sweetly in a dream,
heart slows down, light fades,
Thats when I see the beam,
The suprise the Ace of Spades
Fate has come through Ibuprofen,
1600mg thats 40 pills,
Here I come, destiny again,
A void it always fills
I may not die, I dont care,
I may be in a coma forever,
Even that sounds fare,
Because I wont ever be aware
Never
Copyright ©
alecfernadez
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2004-02-02 09:05:51]
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Re: 16000mg of Ibuprofen
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by TundraHydra on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 10:15:14 AM AEST
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| The line about slow death not being fun brought back memories of wrist slashing suicide attempts that failed on my part. keep up the excellent writing. |
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Re: 16000mg of Ibuprofen
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 09:13:07 PM AEST
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| i understand how it is too go thro so much pain.. my sis is a drug addict and almost died from cutting her wrists.. and i cut my wrists too.. just to feel the pain.. to feel loved.. i kno i need help.. and im happii there is someone out there how actually understands.. my wrists and body are covered with scars.. and u have no idea to kno how it feels when people see it and stare at u.. they just dont understand whats going on in our lives.. i still am suffering depression.. and havent cut myself in a month.. thats the longest ive gone... i hope i can keep going... |
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Re: 16000mg of Ibuprofen
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by EternitysLyre on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 11:54:51 AM AEST
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Disturbingly good; I've never attempted suicide poetry, albeit being quite disappointed with life myself, but the diction's parsimony makes it all the more personal and compelling. With a poet like you out writing for us, I'll never have to even touch the subject once in my life.
Phantasmagorically done.
"Stress doth unravel the mind and weave madness into the soul!"
~The Palatine Poet |
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