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Cloudy Dreams
Contributed by
Wicked
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Saturday, 13th July 2002 @ 07:53:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Her dreams are like the clouds above her around her
They are never ending and never complete
In her sadness they are like a storm and not clear
In her happiness they blow around her smooth and free
And when they challenge her heart and the rain falls down
She leans her face to the rain and kisses it, endearing
A small smile might cradle her lips as the thunder sounds
For in that moment she feels alive and theres no boundaries
When the sun's rays cannot be found not even a glimpse
And the clouds seem to wanna draw her in to almost fade
She closes her eyes and lets them envelope and carress
Like maybe a long lost lover's hand could have made.
Copyright ©
Wicked
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2002-07-13 19:53:09]
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Re: Cloudy Dreams
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by Chrissie on
Saturday, 13th July 2002 @ 11:57:04 PM AEST
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This is lovely..there are some beautiful images here. Well done.
Chrissie |
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Re: Cloudy Dreams
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by lilsmurfy on
Sunday, 14th July 2002 @ 06:06:09 AM AEST
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| very nicely done ..soo smooth and lovely |
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Re: Cloudy Dreams
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by Jacktripper on
Monday, 31st July 2006 @ 02:01:09 PM AEST
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| I agree the imagery is impressive the last verse of the poem sells the poetry. Well done |
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