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Killed The Fight
Contributed by
waos
on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 01:26:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The razor so innocent,
gently grasped, tenderly held tight.
It's killed something inside,
it's killed all your fight.
You remember all the times,
before a razor was your best friend.
You remember how you thought
you could keep going till the end.
But now that seems so distant,
you can't figure out the way to stay.
You've searched so hard for a reason,
but it's all just pushed you farther away.
It presses gently upon your skin,
it's like water on parched lips.
It's like one life in the midst of death,
as the razor caresses your wrist.
You no longer hear anything,
you no longer see.
You're finally able to breath,
able to just be.
Not realizing how deep it's gotten,
not realizing how much release.
but you're finally feeling
a measure of peace.
And if surviving is the best you can do,
who are they to say it's wrong?
Who are they to scream at you
for not being as strong?
Just surviving is a wonder,
for the razor killed all of your fight.
It dimmed your sense of hope,
and darkened your vision of night.
Copyright ©
waos
... [
2004-02-02 01:26:04]
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Re: Killed The Fight
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 02:01:02 AM AEST
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| Awesome. Great write. Keep 'em coming!!!! |
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Re: Killed The Fight
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by TundraHydra on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 10:22:12 AM AEST
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| A simple razor can be your best friend and carry you far beyond the end. Keep writing those poems! |
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Re: Killed The Fight
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by TundraHydra on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 10:23:37 AM AEST
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| A simple razor can be your best friend and carry you far beyond the end. Keep writing those poems! |
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Re: Killed The Fight
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by Rawkergurl2003 on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 03:39:30 AM AEST
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| boy do i know that feeling..great poetry...keep it up! |
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