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Emotional Nakedness
Contributed by
Jason_Robert_Britt
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Wednesday, 4th September 2002 @ 06:49:31 AM in AEST
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Emotions reposed
Nakedness exposed
For all to prejudge
Condemn and begrudge
With twisted sweet tounges
And poisoned black lungs
Taste blood on your lips
Lovers of gossip
Live well hypocrite
Your live indignant
Live pious villans
Live decietful friends
Construe your judgements
Piously repent
The truth is written
Than all man will sin
Copyright ©
Jason_Robert_Britt
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Re: Emotional Nakedness
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by Lia on
Wednesday, 4th September 2002 @ 07:08:14 AM AEST
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"so let's stop hating eachother and learn to love like Jesus did..."
AMEN!!
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Re: Emotional Nakedness
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by Sweetie on
Thursday, 5th September 2002 @ 11:13:07 AM AEST
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"so let's stop hating and love like Jesus did" Oh my goodness that is exactly what I say! Ya know you expressed in this poem what a great guy you are! I love this poem and I wish nothing but all the hatred in the world to go away coz God created us all and not one of us is better than another!! Take care love ya
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Re: Emotional Nakedness
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by tinka_belle on
Thursday, 3rd July 2003 @ 05:09:55 AM AEST
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its funny isnt it how the bible preaches
"love everyone" and "except everyones differences" yet when somene is different
they seem to forget what is written in their
holy bible
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Re: Emotional Nakedness
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 03:50:32 AM AEST
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I liked this and so true religious ppl are some of the biggest hypocrites out there. Great poem and great imagery.
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Re: Emotional Nakedness
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by Bizzy on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 07:20:55 PM AEST
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Bravo, Jason!!! Love is the most important thing that we as Christians can do, yet tough love often calls for words that aren't always complimentary. We hope for them to be tactful in their 'constructive' criticism and nurturing. I think, Jason, that you will receive alot of 'judgmental' statements just because your strong use of language will be misunderstood. I, myself, am a very passive person who shys away from confrontational communication between people, yet I know there is a place for it. By the way, I believe there is a big difference between religious persons and those that are true believers within their hearts, however, God might be the only one that can know the difference.
So be forgiving, please, to those who judge you too harshly. We are all a work in progress. Love, Bizzy |
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