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Fading world of mine

Contributed by LiveTheDream on Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 03:55:46 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

So you want to die?
Die just for one day
End the pain
Come back another day

If there was such a way
I would find it today
The only thing that makes me hold on
Is the knowing ill see him again

What would life be
Without friends and family?
A trip down memory lane
Reminds of the good old days

But now that suddenly changes
As quickly as the sun rises
No one really knows my pain
No one even realises

Yes it’s true I am suicidal
Wishing on a death
I used to think wrong on such things
I was happy I couldn’t see why

And now this is how people see me
But im not surprised or hurt
How can you understand when you have no pain?
Every day a sorrow enters my mind

Today I heard a friend died just by suicide
She was low and down like me
And now here I am
Attempting to do the same

Even though I realise its wrongs
I can’t help this feeling of loneliness,
Fear, hatred, upset, sorrow, anger
Truth, hate, lies and upheaval

Just another day in this fading world of mine
I wish I could invite you
To see the world in a different light
Im just grateful im still here…thanks to him

Copyright © LiveTheDream ... [ 2004-02-01 15:55:46]
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Re: Fading world of mine (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 02:30:28 PM AEST
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hey girl! i know how you feel a lot of the time. i have ppl who keep me alive too. (i have to say that you are one of them) i know you feel down, but if you need sum1 2 talk to im here for you. luv ya mate! luv phil xxx

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