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Dream of Falling
Contributed by
Merry
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Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 02:01:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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sharp corner, turns 90 degrees
unexpected at this late hour
took me off guard
and you asked me
to hold on forever
my hand is slipping
down we go together
the cost of time multiplies
the price we pay for this
and that and everything
we have no need of anything
but you don't believe me
can't see the magic
in stepping off the cliff
racing to the bottom
tumbling through space
don't be afraid I said
the clouds will catch us
wait and see
it always ends the same way....
this dream of falling
gmm 2004
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Merry
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2004-02-01 14:01:43]
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Re: Dream of Falling
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by emystar on
Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 02:11:40 PM AEST
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Sounds exciting.
Very creative.
huggs, luv,
emy |
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Re: Dream of Falling
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 08:35:20 AM AEST
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The best thing about dreams is that you can do anything in them and survive. Damn girl, I love your writing.
Roses,
Larry |
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