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On The Outside
Contributed by
LiveTheDream
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Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 01:38:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Looking from the outside
Through this window I see
Everything I ever wanted to be
Was on the other side of this window
It’s just this feeling of repression
That no one even notices
No one even cares
These emotions of failure within me
I’ve been brought right back to the start again
From these people I used to call “Friends”
I used to be just like them
On the other side of this window
For once I was on the inside
But as I look through the window-
I see my own reflection
And the glint of failure in my eyes of misery and shame
I’m brought right back to the start again
With this feeling of repression
That’s taking over me
Because everything I ever wanted to be
Was on the other side of this window
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2004-02-01 13:38:59]
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Re: On The Outside
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 02:36:11 PM AEST
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this is really good.. i love it..
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Re: On The Outside
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 02:32:43 PM AEST
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| we all feel like this sometimes. i like this. its a really good poem! hope you feel better soon mate. luv phil xxx |
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Re: On The Outside
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by youlied on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 11:18:13 PM AEST
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| Ah I know exactly what you mean....This is a great poem. |
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