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The Rose and The Bee
Contributed by
Maha
on
Wednesday, 4th September 2002 @ 06:23:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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O rose, you are standing still as charming as ever,
Bearing all the pain of the bee’s sting,
Yet never complain or get tired of whatever
The bee takes though it sucks your spring.
And when your beauty and liveliness decline,
The bee flees carelessly and gaily to another pleasure.
Momentous those pleasures are, but divine,
To those who don’t comprehend life’s genuine treasure.
The bee will never change its attitude.
And, rose, what will be left for you?
Melancholy, memories, and solitude;
Waiting for someone to cherish you.
Copyright ©
Maha
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2002-09-04 06:23:59]
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Re: The Rose and The Bee
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by addie on
Wednesday, 4th September 2002 @ 11:40:15 PM AEST
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amazingly written...and yea..the message is crystal clear..keep writing
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Re: The Rose and The Bee
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by FLTulip on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 09:43:41 AM AEST
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| I love this melancholy poem. It is beautiful. Thanks for sharing it. |
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Re: The Rose and The Bee
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by Good_King_Bragi on
Friday, 9th May 2003 @ 12:08:09 PM AEST
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| Maha, this is one of the best pieces of poetry I have read of late so far! however, I just have one question: could you write stuff in Arabic please? |
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Re: The Rose and The Bee
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by Desi on
Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 09:59:17 PM AEST
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| This is beautiful. It touches me, its so well written, the words are pieced together so beautifully. Amazing. You have a gift; don't let is slip away. |
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Re: The Rose and The Bee
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by Desi on
Monday, 19th May 2003 @ 09:59:19 PM AEST
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| This is beautiful. It touches me, its so well written, the words are pieced together so beautifully. Amazing. You have a gift; don't let is slip away. |
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