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Give Me Back My Heart
Contributed by
Jazz
on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 10:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You left me when I needed you the most,
like a dream of mine, that just went up in smoke.
You walked away without a tear or sigh.
You were an angel from my deepest prayers,
who was supposed to always be there,
but your smile was an evil disguise.
Then today you just walk back into my life,
thinking everything was going to be alright,
but I just don't know if it is anymore.
I took it really hard when you went away.
I cried every night, and all through the day,
all because you walked out and closed the door.
I do still love you, but it's unfortunate that I do.
I don't wanna be hurt again, not by the likes of you.
All this, when I used to think destiny played a part.
So, here are your bags, your coat and your ring,
and as for me, I ask for only one more thing.
Before you leave, please give me back my heart.
Copyright ©
Jazz
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2004-01-31 22:30:00]
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Re: Give Me Back My Heart
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by RochelleLloyd on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 10:36:11 PM AEST
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| It's a little sad, but it's very good. |
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Re: Give Me Back My Heart
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by Kie on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 11:35:30 PM AEST
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| This brought tears to my eyes. Filled with emotion and written so well. I've been there and I do understand. The clincher for me was the last stanza it hit home. Remarkable poem and I am sure lots of people will relate. Kie |
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Re: Give Me Back My Heart
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by emystar on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 06:51:29 PM AEST
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Sad but very smart.
Great work of art!
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Give Me Back My Heart
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by Twinky on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 03:31:59 PM AEST
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| wonderfully written..... i have been there..... my problem is that i dont want my heart back from this guy i just want him to give his heart to me the way i did him..... love is a terrible thing and obviously never goes our way but i guess in the end it is worth it!! once again this is a very great poem, keep up the good work and i hope you one day find a wonderful person to give your heart to and i hope that this time it works out in your favor!!!! love to all, Crystal a.k.a. Twinky |
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