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untitled
Contributed by
redwest802
on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 07:15:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You say you don’t know me
I say you do
You say you can’t love me
I say it’s not true
You say I am different
I say I am not
You say I am cold
I say I am hot
If I was black
You’d say I’m white
If I was day
You’d say I’m night
But when it comes down to it
When all’s said and done
Why are we here?
Is it pleasure and fun?
Do opposites attract?
Then repel apart
Do we try again?
And have a new start
Suppose we won’t find out
Till it’s to late
We will have to leave it
Up to Mother Nature and fate
Copyright ©
redwest802
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2004-01-31 19:15:51] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kie on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 10:55:22 PM AEST (User
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A couple of titles come to mind off the top of my head. (You Say) & (I Ponder What You Say)
Anyway, I liked your poem alot. Kie |
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Re: untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by bttrflynajar on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 11:11:17 PM AEST (User
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i love all of your writing... this one flows so wonderfully you have sucha great talent! |
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