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Catastrophe
Contributed by
forever_lonely
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Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 07:13:23 PM in AEST
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I sit here scribing, but words cannot say
The way i feel, on this sorrowful day.
This feelings expressed cause so much pain
To know all my writes, are in nothng but vain.
I showed you my 'talent', you began to curse
Little did i know, you ment so much worse.
You followed your head and looked into me
A small insignificant person named forever_lonely.
Words cant express the pain that i feel
To know theres no point to my poetry wheel.
My circle of life, has turned into a square
I just cant bare to realise, that life is unfair.
My fire has gone, im nothing left now
I think this should be my final lost bow
You smile at me, and you laugh cause you know it
Though hard to believe... i was never a poet.
Copyright ©
forever_lonely
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2004-01-31 19:13:23]
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Re: Catastrophe
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 07:51:03 PM AEST
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who told you that? you write from the heart and have talent untapped to give up now would be wrong...look at my early work you will see...I believe in you
Shari |
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Re: Catastrophe
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by Lessa on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 08:43:12 PM AEST
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| whoever said that needs to be smacked in the face. you write beuifuly, like a flowering opening, at first u dont see the beuty in your poetry, but those who appriciate art see how great it is, and how much better it could get |
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Re: Catastrophe
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 09:22:44 PM AEST
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| ahhh but you are a poet my friend, and one very fine, never quit writing, we think your devine................................ |
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Re: Catastrophe
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by Kie on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 10:47:55 PM AEST
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| You are one of my favorite male poets on this site. I do not say that lightly. You draw from emotion deeply embedded inside of you and when you write your pen has the golden touch. I tell you it flows and many times I have found myself with tears in my eyes. What we are telling you is true. Hold fast, have faith in yourself for you are truly talented! Kie |
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Re: Catastrophe
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 08:35:50 PM AEST
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| Good its about time you realised your writing is pants so just stop doing it cause we dont want to read it |
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Re: Catastrophe
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by fallen_eyes on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 06:56:58 AM AEST
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| who ever posted the comment saying luke should quit wake up look at everyone elses opinion just cuz u dont like it dont mean everyone else is going to follow you. I love his poems and think your a fool and very simple minded if you dont understand the true emotion thats goes into every single one. love ya stuff luke xx |
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Re: Catastrophe
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by blueheart on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 09:03:52 AM AEST
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| Oh, I totally disagree. You're a brilliant poet and you should not stop writing. |
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