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Replay
Contributed by
Eve
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Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 05:06:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'm sorry again, I've lied again
Forgot to remember way back when
I promised you, now I've lied to you
I could tell you again how your words pull me through
But all I can say
Is I need you today
I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I'm sorry
I couldn't tell you how many times
My mind's replayed these rhymes
In your hands does my heart sit
I didn't give it to you, you took it
I'm sorry again, I've failed again
I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I'm sorry
Words could never tell
I'm so sorry I fell
I'm sorry I forgot to remember
Once it died down to an ember
I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I'm sorry.
Copyright ©
Eve
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2004-01-31 17:06:13]
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Re: Replay
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by sicknivesevered on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 05:33:50 PM AEST
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| Excellent write. You make it flow very nicely. I think everyone can connect with what you wrote here. |
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Re: Replay
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by Kie on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 10:38:57 PM AEST
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| This poem gave me goose bumps. I certainly can relate and connect to this one. Let me commend you, this was excellent. Kie |
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Re: Replay
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 08:22:02 AM AEST
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Yes, yes indeed. I can connect with this poem very well. Eve, I never will figure out how you do it, how manage to be so great.
By the way, the title is perfect, so there...you don't suck at titles!
Keep writing, or fall into the sewer head first,
-V.S. |
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