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Forgotten Thoughts
Contributed by
amandadawn1982
on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 04:50:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Lying awake
Restless mind
Uneasy senses
Quivering fingers
Aching bones
Everlasting dreams
Repetitive memories
Reoccurring images
Dreaming reality
Horrid nightmares
Shocked eyes
Impressive flashbacks
Terror screams
Shaking lips
Wet Cheeks
Streaming tears
Upright position
Uncomfortable heat
Rapid breaths
Harsh pulse
Darkened surroundings
Fading horrors
Quiet silence
Sudden remembrance
Calming sound
Slower breathing
Unrelenting heart
Tired strength
Welcoming Embrace
Soft support
Seductive touch
Sweet Kiss
Reassuring smile
Forever secure
Tormenting dreams
Cease existence
Copyright ©
amandadawn1982
... [
2004-01-31 16:50:12]
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Re: Forgotten Thoughts
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by deathdrop on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 05:09:05 PM AEST
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well done. this is excellent!
short and snappy words always go alone way... i really like it. |
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Re: Forgotten Thoughts
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by Eve on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 05:12:34 PM AEST
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I love the way it doesn't waver from pattern, and yet isn't the slightest bit monotonous. Seems to be simple, but is really more complex than a knot.
Wonderful write.
Keep writing,
-Eve. |
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Re: Forgotten Thoughts
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by hope on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 11:40:38 PM AEST
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its like you see me when i'm sleeping....very well put ....nightmares are horrible...especially when their due to things of the past they are terrifying. Great work...i look forward to reading your poems
hope
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