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Keep On
Contributed by
Merry
on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 04:42:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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_________________________
holding my breath
in case you change your mind
driving south again
listing to one side
while I listen to a song
that reminds me of you
I remember about us
when feelings were new
everything possible
seemed to open before us
sun on our faces and wind at our backs
a long time ago
now feelings have drained
into muddy confusion
why did I loved you
question the feelings
take me for granted
take me or leave me
those are the choices
we've grown gray in the shadows
too tired to fight
so we keep on going
I hold onto your hand
a false smile on my face
trying to please you
the markers add up to a very long time
gmm 2004
Copyright ©
Merry
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2004-01-31 16:42:06]
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Re: Keep On
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 07:20:47 PM AEST
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| oh! great write! carries one who reads you right to the last line wanting more, your poetry is like the tastest choclate bar, when its through you want another one right away... its a good thing we arent on the same road at the same time, you going south and me north gaille, lol...couple of dreaming poetic drivers lol, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Keep On
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 10:05:49 PM AEST
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I dont think it's possible for you to write something badly. Your pen is magic Gaille.
Roses
Larry |
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Re: Keep On
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by Kie on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 10:35:42 PM AEST
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| All I can say is -WOW-! You have wowed me again with another unique poem. Kie |
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