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You Did This To Me
Contributed by
Suz
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Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 02:58:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You did this to me
You just came, killed me
You made me worry
Why wont you say what's wrong?
Spending my nights awake
How many pills did you take?
I hate these fears that you make
I am so worried, what is wrong?
I am not angry
Only afraid
I want to know why you cry
I wont be angry
I'm just afraid
I love you and I wont let you die.
Copyright ©
Suz
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2004-01-31 14:58:53]
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Re: You Did This To Me
(User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 03:37:16 PM AEST
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I DON'T THINK IT'S THAT BAD,SOUNDS VERY HEART WARMING,LIKE YOU CARE ABOUT SOMEBODY OTHER THAN YOURSELF! THAT'S WHAT POETRY SHOULD BE ALL ABOUT!!
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Re: You Did This To Me
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by alecfernadez on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 03:49:13 PM AEST
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This by far
IS NOT
a bad poem, its actually pretty damn good. You shouldnt shun your work by saying its bad, firstly cos no-one will read it, and also its not very good for self-esteem. This poem is really great, and the rhymin, the emotion, the power is all present in your own way
peace |
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