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A Red Rosebud

Contributed by TearS on Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 12:57:57 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Drowsiness takes me far away
I don’t notice when I lose myself
A long green way shows me light
Gentle breeze touches me all over
An unknown girl looks at me from far
My heartbeats run fast, spontaneously
Her face becomes visible as I walk fast
Suddenly rain comes, I feel the world
And when I reach her too close to me
I bring out the saved love from my inside
I hold it in my strong grip, but I feel shy
Her big blue eyes take my depressed life
She holds a red rosebud to me with love
I get no word to tell, I take the flower
But there was a thorn in that that hurts me
And so, I wake up from the sudden dream
I find myself in my old dark room alone.

Copyright Â© TearS ... [ 2004-01-31 12:57:57]
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Re: A Red Rosebud (User Rating: 1 )
by Letting_Go on Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 02:47:07 AM AEST
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Whoah a good description of going to sleep and having a dream and then waking only to feel the sense of being alone again. I appriciate this poem and since you have dedicated it to all the sad ones out there, I am one of them. Thanking you.

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