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A Valentine for my Wife
Contributed by
norm
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Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 11:37:54 AM in AEST
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They wisely made a day like this,
Acknowledge love, acknowledge bliss,
The years fly by and busy thee,
Hardly pay attention, we,
Valentine is that good day,
For us to restate and I say,
I love you, dear, and I'm sincere,
Without you, I'd be lost, I fear,
So let us now, my wonder dear,
Pledge our love for one more year.
Copyright ©
norm
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2004-01-31 11:37:54]
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Re: A Valentine for my Wife
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by jeanie on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 01:11:52 PM AEST
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okay, I wanted to post a looong comment to explain why I disagree with you...but then I changed my mind and decided to put it into few verses, maybe it would be more clear ;)
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Re: A Valentine for my Wife
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 04:29:15 AM AEST
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Let us hope that people remember the sentiment in your words.Too many people seem to neglect the ones they claim to love.
Nice work
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