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Dreams
Contributed by
gery_giggles
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Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 09:37:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Dreaming in a harsh reality
trying to find what keeps me alive.
Lost words I've screamed
just to understand
the hole that sings from my heart.
Faint memories play without sound
in the waste land i call my mind.
Monsters roam without an exit,
they can never leave the trap they've created.
Beating down like rain are my wasted tears,
running to find my own little wishing star.
But my very own monsters
seem to come back,
when i can't understand the smile
I placed on my hard face.
Tomorrow the dream will disapear,
then come again in the silence of the night
and recreate monsters i want to forget.
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gery_giggles
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2004-01-31 09:37:44]
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Re: Dreams
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 03:39:56 PM AEST
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Geeze what a poem! I know what you mean felt like that many times, dreams can sometime be very delusional. Written skilfully I really liked it! Wonderful imagery! Great write!
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Re: Dreams
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by Fairy on
Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 01:30:42 AM AEST
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I really like your work.. keep it up, I look forward to more
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