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Beauty
Contributed by
livinsociety
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Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 10:53:02 PM in AEST
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Eyes that resemble vivid plant green and light bare earth at the same time,
colors crossing each other fighting for dominance resulting in unexplainable beauty.
Hair soft that begs you to caress, smelling of exotic fruits and texture of rain.Knowledge and understanding of yourself she comprehends while wonder of drives to love.
A siren that dares not sing her song to your ears for shyness of your judgment.
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Re: Beauty
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 11:41:34 PM AEST
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Outstanding! Great mental image and beautifully written.
Very well done
Larry
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Re: Beauty
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 11:47:43 PM AEST
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| ahhh mick, sooo beautiful! ...your heart loves, your eyes see, your soul full of life, ...never stop writing babe, your talent shines here, it is so clear how much you love her, ...you warm your moms heart, warmest loving welcome to ypdc, ever mom xxx... |
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Re: Beauty
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by Angelic_Demon on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 01:23:17 PM AEST
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Hey bro, love it. It's well written.
Welcome to the site.... heh.
Love,
Mars |
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Re: Beauty
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 03:18:39 PM AEST
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Ah, the incredible psychic knowledge of a woman for her lover is amazing. As is this piece of work. A woman has to be coaxed into revealing her true inner beauty by a careful loving man. I recognize that you see beyond the outer beauty to the real center of a woman. You will be rewarded for this by finding the most exquisite love.
Keep writing,
Rita |
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Re: Beauty
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 05:37:11 PM AEST
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| hey honey, this really is beautiful...xxx |
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Re: Beauty
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by Archie on
Sunday, 23rd May 2004 @ 05:31:12 PM AEST
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| A surprisingly good poem |
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