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His Mistake

Contributed by annabell on Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 09:09:43 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

He says he wants to die,
to soar above this world and fly.
To get away from the pain and sickness.
Those are two things he could definately miss.
But then he thinks about his girlfriend.
he wouldn't want her to find his life at an end.
Yet his treatments knock him down.
He thinks he could end his life with one loud sound.
He remembers the gun in its case.
With it he had become a target ace.
but now it meant something more
it could be his way out his door.
She shouldn't be home soon,
she took his neice to see the latest cartoon.
So he puts the gun to his head,
and sits down on his bed.
This was his way to end the pain.
putting a bullet in his midbrain.
His hand was shaking he was scared
he looked at the letter for her he had prepared.
He heard the dog bark and jumped,
back on the bed he slumped.
The life was flowing out of him,
He didn't want to end his life this grim.
He made an unchangeable mistake.
When his own life he did take.

Copyright © annabell ... [ 2004-01-30 21:09:43]
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Re: His Mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 09:17:58 PM AEST
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What a mistake... Pain is smething we will cope with all of our time on earth.
Take care.
David

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