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Too Bad
Contributed by
pyrochick
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Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 08:16:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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You have alot of nerve
showing up like this
i told you i never wanted to see your face
till the day we both die
and now you want me back
sorry i can't do that
you know that saying
"Everything heals over time"
well i guess i haven't had enough
i'm still **** at all that stuff
that stuff that made me wonder
if we would stay together
that stuff that made me cry all in the night
that stuff i thought was love
but now i know better
and your're not getting me back
not now
not ever
Copyright ©
pyrochick
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2004-01-30 20:16:52]
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Re: Too Bad
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by garyh on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 08:28:32 PM AEST
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| well *****t is actually spelled "*****" but yeah, nice write anyways :P |
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Re: Too Bad
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by Empty_Soul on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 08:48:57 PM AEST
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nice one gary u dildo. comment on the common spelling mistake, *****. brilliant poem, so much emotion here, if this is your life well done for not giving in, I wouldnt. Its a shame some people can not treat people right but I guess thats the way it has to be. Good luck with future men, we're not all bad!!! lol
keep on fighting
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Re: Too Bad
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by lil_angel on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 09:26:19 PM AEST
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| i personally liked this poem good write! |
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