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My Sweet Release
Contributed by
Night_Child
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Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 08:12:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Hurt time and time again
By so many people
This world has let me down
A loneliness that won't subside
The inevitable fate
Of the knife across my skin
I lack hope
The will to live
Slowly I die
But you are blinded
You cannot see
This young girl
Who has seen too much already
Felt too much
I'll crawl into the dark
Beaten by harsh words
Insane I must be
My thought are so mixed up
Too late
It's too late to be saved
I've fallen
Now I will wait for the sweet kiss of death
My sweet release from everything
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Night_Child
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2004-01-30 20:12:46]
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Re: My Sweet Release
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 03:16:07 PM AEST
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Oh very dark, I know what this poem says written something like this myself, hope you passed this depressing state. I liked this poem very expressive
Anne :D |
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Re: My Sweet Release
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by Fairy on
Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 01:13:38 PM AEST
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| I wanted to say I'm sorry.. reading this reminds me so much of myself that it's scary.. I know what it's like to only be able to get any feelings by cutting.. I think I started doing it because I was convinced I was numb to all emotions, except the torments I was feeling inside of my mind.. I wish I could take your pain away, no one, should have to feel this way.. trust me, there will be brighter days |
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Re: My Sweet Release
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 03:12:07 PM AEST
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what a beautiful, if painful, poem.. i wrote a poem called 'sweet release' but its nowhere near as good as this..
charlotte x_x_x |
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