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Nightmare!
Contributed by
haleywasalone
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Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 07:18:33 PM in AEST
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Why am I here? Is this some kind of nightmare? They won't leave my alone. Thier watching me in my home. I can't stop feeling like im in a dome, but I know I am in my home. They drive me insane, but I still have the courage to remain.
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Re: Nightmare!
(User Rating: 1 ) by jeanie on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 07:28:26 PM AEST (User
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hm, I'd recommend you to rewise your spelling and another thing is that I think you could put rhymes on separate lines, coz then it's much more comfortable to read it ;)
good luck with next ones
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