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The Curse
Contributed by
whisper-of-night
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Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 07:17:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Slowly the tide of passion fade,
Replaced,
By that aching wound,
Which I again ….. embraced;
Your soul-shattering words
Are still echoes ….. echoes in my head,
So upon the backseat
Of friendship,
There quietly ….. I laid.
As the time flew by,
When my head
Starts to rise high,
Beside my ear I hear you sigh-
‘You are whom I think of
In the endless nights!’
What is the name?!
Of this little game!!
Tightly around your finger,
My pulse ….. is bound!
You say you cried
At what I said,
But don’t you know?
It’s the blood of my heart
That you shed!!
I am longing, I am hoping,
But it get only more ….. confusing!
I am lost in your words,
May be darling you ..... are my curse!
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2004-01-30 19:17:03]
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Re: The Curse
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by hawaii06 on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 08:36:11 PM AEST
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Good poem..but who's it for????
It's nice!!!!!!!!
Jamie |
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Re: The Curse
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by Letting_Go on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 01:13:19 AM AEST
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| Absolutely captivating. The backseat of friendship - what a way to describe it.. Your pulse around her finger - good wording. Words can shed blood from your heart too you know. This was a truely excellent poem. Appealed to me 100 per cent. |
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Re: The Curse
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 08:05:46 AM AEST
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Beautiful!!!!! A bit sad as well, hope this girl realises the love you have for her! A curse indeed .....Amazing poem! I loved it!!!!
Anne :D |
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Re: The Curse
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by Sweet-Poison on
Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 06:50:18 AM AEST
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| ah, again, I love this poem, just like your others =) Lovely, Well done *hugs* |
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Re: The Curse
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by L-Dee on
Sunday, 8th February 2004 @ 02:40:47 PM AEST
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| Excellent poem, well written |
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