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Sitting
Contributed by
putteragain
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Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 06:56:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
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sitting with you my love on this golden beach
shows me that happiness is there in my reach
with you to hold for eternity is everything to me
i want you always here forever by the sea
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putteragain
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2004-01-30 18:56:33]
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Re: Sitting
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by Kie on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 09:26:51 PM AEST
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| I loved your poem! I wanted to keep on reading because it flowed so well. Well done. |
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Re: Sitting
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by venkat on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 03:27:08 AM AEST
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very beautiful poem..I have read it on the forum also..I also appreciate your talent..
venkat
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Re: Sitting
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by harmoni on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 02:16:11 PM AEST
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| sound's peachy this person is very lucky |
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Re: Sitting
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 02:58:42 PM AEST
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Short and sweet written with love, great write!
Anne :D |
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