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Unrequited Love
Contributed by
pumpkinpie
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Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 05:15:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You are the cause I contradict my own reason
That my soul reigns in winter's frigid season
That the facade of one's heart, my heart, seems so bleak
That my heart remains oblique,your love I bespeak
But all these efforts addressed to you are futile
That permitting myself to love you even though is simply torture,something brutal
I'm a chronic lover,yes I'm addicted,I can't abstain
Just a mere reflection of someone with nothing to obtain
Is there no rhyme in this world I can write for you
Is there not even an inch of your love I can subdue
Is there no way for your gaze to follow mine,to remain in your view
To find myself lost in your words,in you eyes,or better yet- in you
I'll be waiting,watching through hope for a sign
Till then,your true essence I will never define
But one thing remains the same, I plead silently :
Unto thine own self be true,if not of you,I ask of me.
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Re: Unrequited Love
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by Necromant on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 02:32:32 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem!!!!!!! Sad but wonderfully written!
Is there no rhyme in this world I can write for you
Is there not even an inch of your love I can subdue
Wow great write!
Anne :D |
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Re: Unrequited Love
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 04:23:21 PM AEST
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| NICE WORK PUMPKIN!KEEP ON TRUCKIN__OR WRITING!VERY GOOD POEM'I CAN RELATE |
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Re: Unrequited Love
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by shelby on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 10:41:31 AM AEST
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this is awesome!!
michelle |
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Re: Unrequited Love
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by Jazz on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2004 @ 11:19:05 PM AEST
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But one thing remains the same, I plead silently :
Unto thine own self be true,if not of you,I ask of me.
Sealed with a kiss... Another great right! I love your work!
PS thanks for all your comments on mine, as well.
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Re: Unrequited Love
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by Stitch on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 03:44:20 PM AEST
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I can relate. The addiction clutches like the jaws of a pitbull. Ouch. You expressed it well.
Stitch |
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Re: Unrequited Love
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by WordPoet on
Wednesday, 7th April 2004 @ 04:29:31 PM AEST
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Unrequited love, a topic of the heart,
You seemed to sum it up, right there from the start,
A vivid piece of work written by and by,
Pulling at emotions, to make a person cry.
-=grin=-
Great job... |
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Re: Unrequited Love
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 10:17:04 PM AEST
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This is sad but is like really beautiful.
Spazzo |
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Re: Unrequited Love
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 12:41:57 PM AEST
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| "I'll be waiting,watching through hope for a sign" How hopeful this is! How hard it is to wait. This was precious. Blessings! |
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Re: Unrequited Love
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 12:30:32 AM AEST
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Now that is a real tear jerker.
"is it possible to be unwilling to let go simply because that's the only emotion that consumes our time and energy in times like these?" My answer to this question: Yes, I believe it possible.
This is another absolutley wonderful poem and how all too well I can relate right now. I can't read any more like this tonight. Meant in a good way as this is how powerfully this poem affected me.
Thank you for sharing.
Tim
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Re: Unrequited Love
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by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 7th August 2020 @ 03:21:33 PM AEST
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Wow..................
You hit a nerve with this one.
Sometimes I wonder why we even try. |
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