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Please
Contributed by
hydra
on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 04:00:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You think you've found true love one day
But then they turn around and say
I don't think this works out
And you feel as if you'll scream and shout
Your eyes suddenly well up with tears
And she's confirmed your worst of fears
You love her but she doesn't love you
Time and time again, she'll prove this true
Sad thing is you feel like you're still in love
And you pray to the heavens far above
Please let her come to her senses
Please let her return to the fences
Of my heart where she rightly belongs
And let me once more hear the song
That plays off her lips when she whispers the tune
Three lifesaving words that come out as: I love you
Copyright ©
hydra
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2004-01-30 16:00:45]
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Re: Please
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by Letting_Go on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 01:04:08 AM AEST
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Sadly enough this happens quite frequently in life. It isn't a rare occurance anymore. I'm glad to say that this was a good write, it appealed to me as I too had to go through that occurance. best of luck to ya.
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Re: Please
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by harmoni on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 01:54:29 PM AEST
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| Sometimes it ' s hard to see the true.When we love someone . That they don't love us back.When we put our heart ,and soul into things.They say that there's alway another person. That will love us. Keep trying you will find it . Good luck. |
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Re: Please
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 07:39:31 PM AEST
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I pray she'll answer back to you the words you wish to hear.
Take care.
David |
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