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The Misunderstood Teenage Mind
Contributed by
intelectualpoet
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Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 01:27:46 AM in AEST
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You Say that I don't know right from wrong,
That if I don't live by your every word,
I will find my self on the wrong side of the gun.
You think that I can't handle peer-pressure,
That I have/would do drugs.
Oh how you're so wrong.
I know what's right fro me,
What's in my best interest.
I can find things out for myself.
You need to let me take that first step alone,
If you ever want me to go out on my own.
Please trust me,
I won't bring shame to the family name.
Peer-pressure has nothing on me,
I don't do drugs,
Unless you count adrenaline,
If so, then I'm guilty,
lock me up now.
Mom, Dad,
You need to trust me,
I can do this,
But this time without your guidence.
Believe me when I say,
That I will come to you,
Whenever I am in harms way.
But, until that day comes,
I need to you support me,
To know that you have raised me right.
Can and will you do this for me?
Or will I just remain missunderstood?
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Re: The Misunderstood Teenage Mind
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by monica109 on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 03:08:26 AM AEST
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| this poem would make a good song if tweaked a little! It sounds like "Drown" by three days grace |
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Re: The Misunderstood Teenage Mind
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 03:06:03 AM AEST
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Poetry is a great way to describe how you're feeling. Or just plain writing. That's what I used to get to my parents. It really works.
Take care.
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Re: The Misunderstood Teenage Mind
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by Avarice_Riot on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 03:18:45 AM AEST
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| This could very well be the story of my life. Well done, I loved reading it. |
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Re: The Misunderstood Teenage Mind
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by deathdrop on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 02:29:48 PM AEST
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| well said! so you felt like this? me too, and still do some times... only my parents won't let me get involved in those sort of people. they don't under-stand me! |
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