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Verdant Meadow
Contributed by
Merry
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Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 10:02:35 PM in AEST
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mouthwatering thoughts of you
drift through my mind
without my consent or approval
uncontrollable desire sparks
daydreams and fantasies
sleeping in the verdant meadow
naked in your arms
you read to me and smoke cigarettes
I wrap myself in a tablecloth
wear it like a designer dress
you laugh at that and kiss me hard
making sure I understand
that I belong to you, the gypsy king
with amber eyes and sensuos mouth
you own my soul and without a doubt
the only man who has ever tamed me
we waste the afternoon drinking wine
and kissing in the verdant meadow
gmm2003
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Merry
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Re: Verdant Meadow
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 11:11:46 PM AEST
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| this is sooo beautiful, words fail me sometimes when i comment on your poetry, because i love it so much! what a mellow place to be is all i can say, plz smack me later for lack of adjectives lol, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Verdant Meadow
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by evryrose on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 11:23:33 PM AEST
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| This is so comfortable and yet again a true talent of words. Thanx so much for sharing |
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Re: Verdant Meadow
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by Cobalt on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 11:59:28 PM AEST
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| Didn't you write one about the gypsy king before? I liked this one as well. I swear the other one was slightly more descriptive though. Nice write. |
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Re: Verdant Meadow
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by kfghockeyfan on
Wednesday, 2nd January 2008 @ 11:51:17 AM AEST
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| Beautiful control between vocabulary and love. All of us can feel how the person feels. |
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Re: Verdant Meadow
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by Silent-No-More on
Wednesday, 2nd January 2008 @ 12:04:31 PM AEST
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Saw this scroll by in the comment box and am glad I came by for a read....
Personally, I sooo wouldn't call the afternoon "wasted". That kind of nothing-but-you day should be, I'd suggest, at the top of everyone's to-do list. *wink*
Wonderfully delivered, merry. Loved this.
~Snemmy |
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