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Perfection
Contributed by
forever_lonely
on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 07:19:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Lying on a bed of roses,
Lost inside your moonlit glare,
My body flutters as heat does rise
My palms sweat slightly, at your loving stare.
Listening to your every word
Im lost in a soul compelete
This place in time our bodies collide
We make our hearts come close and meet
Heat rises till we are lost in passion
Carressing is our touch, burning deep within
Our bodies together, like one fuelled machine
We make our wish, on this night of unholy sin
Our hearts of now true happiness
Our faces of emotion so strong
We ride the night till the point of ecstacy
Riding hard, Riding slow, Riding long
In a flush of emotion, our bodies erupt
Together weve come so far now my love
This one moment of true loves hot actions
Keep us together, like the sweet turtle dove
Copyright ©
forever_lonely
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2004-01-29 19:19:21]
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Re: Perfection
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by lil_angel on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 07:55:08 PM AEST
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| awww very good write...i pictured it! Keep them coming and i wish the best for you |
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Re: Perfection
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by Necromant on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 07:59:23 PM AEST
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What a hot sensual poem! Full of passion and love. Great write! The wording is very descriptive and emotional. I really loved this poem! You're very talented keep writing!
Luv
Anne :D |
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Re: Perfection
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 08:28:13 PM AEST
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| Really a romantic poem. Sealed with a whole lot of love. Good. |
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Re: Perfection
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 10:04:39 PM AEST
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I think I am too young to be reading this!....good write very vivid
Shari |
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Re: Perfection
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 12:08:28 AM AEST
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| whooo whooo luke, keep em' coming, ~no pun intended, oops! maybe it was, lol, great poem, hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Perfection
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by blissfully_fluffi on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 07:39:45 AM AEST
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Another great read luke but as your mother i really didnt need to picture all that, lol, as im always telling you, you are very talented so keep up the good writes
luv mumsie xxx |
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Re: Perfection
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by bluoreo on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 02:14:31 PM AEST
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Awesome write! It was as if I was there. Good describing. I like, I like.
-Eric |
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Re: Perfection
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by Empty_Soul on
Saturday, 31st January 2004 @ 07:21:32 AM AEST
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yeah right im sure annette love readin it! adey dont give it her! lmao, im only jokin adey dont hurt me!!!!! haha. great poem dude, loved it, lots of emotion and imagery although i'd like to see the images without u in them! lol.
great write.
keep on fighting
never stop writing
john |
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