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The Ghost Inside

Contributed by Tanna on Tuesday, 3rd September 2002 @ 07:41:27 PM in AEST
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She wears her teenaged innocence

In the colors of black and blue

If you question her to closely

She'll turn away from you



What she sees as misguided love

Is really a form of hate

She thinks about making changes

Before it's just to late



She turns to Dad for guidance

He knows little of her tale

She's never hinted of the abuse she's withstood

She'll save him from the detail



When she approaches Dad

His response is "I'm to busy for you right now."

She tries to make him see she needs his help

But she doesn't quite know how



"It's ok, I can handle this."

She murmurs in her head

Then "he" found out she went to Dad

And beat her till she bled



Trapped in this situation

She tries so hard to get out

It's one step forward and three steps back

A bleak future, she has no doubt



Another day passes, another beating occurs

She withstands a further attack

"How can a 22 year old hate so much?"

A soul "he" seems to lack



Not sure how much more she can take

Things are looking bleak

Worried about his reaction

To her brother, she will speak



Once told of her tales of terror

He stares at her in shock

"Worry no more, little sister"

"I will become your rock"



Big brother holds little sister

He tries to absorb her pain

To hear the mistreatment she speaks of

It's slowly driving him insane



"Did you talk to Dad?" he asks her

"I tried, but he won't hear."

To her now unstable brother

His mission has become quite clear



He spends a lot of time with her

Bringing out the girl inside

She forgot this side of herself

She thought that part had died



They spend their time together talking

He rebuilds her self-esteem

As she begins to come out of her shell

He begins to scheme



Unknown to her and her abuser

Her brother has grand plans

A single thought runs through his head

"I'll kill him with my bare hands!"



Big brother stalks the abuser

The abuser's unaware of his fate

Her brother finds him in a bar

He approaches him, irate



"How dare you touch my sister" he hisses

"You're twice the size of her!"

"Go near her again, and I'll beat you, boy"

"Of that you can be sure."



Abuser smirks at brother

"Just who the hell are you?"

"What's your plan, to threaten me?"

If the abuser only knew...



A vision passes through his head

Of his sister bloodied and broken

No need for words, he grabs his neck

His intentions left unspoken



Grinning at him, he begins to squeeze

Terror passes through the others eyes

"This is some of what my sister felt!"

He snarls, as the other man cries



Her abuser never again came near her

Seeing her filled him with dread

For every time he looked at her

Terror filled his head



Every day she thanks God for her brother

From the abyss, he pulled her away

But inside her remains uncertainty

She can't seem to keep it at bay



Years have gone by, they both grew older

But the ghost is still inside

Of the pain and the humiliation

That she continues to try to hide.





Copyright © Tanna ... [ 2002-09-03 19:41:27]
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Re: The Ghost Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Jason_Robert_Britt on Wednesday, 4th September 2002 @ 05:26:25 AM AEST
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You did a really good job of telling this painful, yet inspirational poem. I personally want to thank you for it, because I was the older brother in this story to my sister. If you want to read about a similar experiance, please find jason robert britt in the archives and read "Dragging Me Down With You." it is about all the times as a child I walked in on my father molesting my sister, and then how he'd beat me up out of spite so i would be afraid of him. you'll be happy to know that the story ends when i called the police on him and had him locked away. no one in the family has talked to him now for six years. I spent many years by my sisters side, trying to protect her and love her, show here someone cared. I read your poem as a tribute to your brother, who was the only person there when you were in a hard place. And you've inspired me to post a poem my sister wrote for me a few years ago. Thank you and remember to love each other unconditionally.


Re: The Ghost Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by riverofwords on Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 07:50:41 AM AEST
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wow tanna

this is not you know what

an awesome awesome write that if others in similar stiuation read it ..would inspire thwem ti have courage
a great talent for showcasing a very difficult subject
im sorry to do this to you

but this is
"MY POEM OF THE WEEK
peace be your journey

Terry




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