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Someone Like You
Contributed by
LiveTheDream
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Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 04:20:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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They say im mad
To love someone like you
A wintry October it must have been
Sitting outside the music block
When your eyes glanced over
And caught mine
People began to laugh
They said it was “only a crush”
Something I should get over-
“Forget about”
“You don’t even know the guy”
“Move on”
It made me so angry
They couldn’t see what we saw-
A love meant to be
So strong from the very start
Something they wouldn’t understand
Only when they dream for
Now three months on
And were stronger than strong
A bond no one imagined for
A love so right
Neither you nor I
Would have dreamt of
Yet still they criticise under their breaths:
“Hopeless romantics”
“Foolish love”
“It will never last”
“They can’t be in love”
“When will she move on?”
But as I sit here now surrounded by them all
And their jealous thoughts
I smile and laugh
Just knowing what its like;
What its like to love someone like you
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LiveTheDream
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2004-01-29 16:20:23]
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Re: Someone Like You
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by CountryGirl on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 06:12:26 PM AEST
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| So true with so many. |
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Re: Someone Like You
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by Mouth on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 07:10:11 PM AEST
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You go girl, love is best when it is all mushy! Screw 'em....
Sarah |
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Re: Someone Like You
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by blueheart on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 08:35:41 PM AEST
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| Nice write. |
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Re: Someone Like You
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 01:49:55 AM AEST
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| Very nice write. Listening to friends always seems to wreck things. I'm happy for you that you endured and made it. Nicely done. You conveyed the idea very well. |
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