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DADDY DEER
Contributed by
emystar
on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 09:13:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Dennis, once my son-in-law
U say U luv our little Ty,
U spit fire into
Dee's ocean blue eyes.
Pushing her into life
on her own,
my, my?
You can't luv Ty-n-push
his mom, away.
Daddy deer, oh daddy deer
There's laws that will
bring u down for
u don't live up to your own divorce decree!
oh man!
U judge her and beat
her down but
she's up now.
Look around!
U was sexing her best friend
pointing fingers.
Oh me!
Your own selfish
pride is making
a monkey of u.
Can't u see?
So let's get to
nitty, gritty son.
Get ready 'cause
the judge will tighten
your screws,
See son?
Sonny, Sonny, Sonny,
My, my you've so
much to learn.
Dee's thru, done!
What was a roll in the hay for you
brought, Dylon
your magnetic son.
I know you're a desent
dad
'cause Dylon says so.
He's such a brite
star lite straite
from God's own heart.
Daddy deer you aren't
to smart hitting
his mom
straite thru her heart!
When God wants us on our knees
he gives us family.
I understand out
of control, blinded
by the sun's glow.
2 witnesses at the
last fit u throwed!
Take that energy eating
you away let it go
live free 2 day!
Yes ripped her heart
wide open
bleeding her soul!
All you did was
critasize on-n-on.
Well she's Swedish,
Indian,
German etc,
blonde bumb shell
all the way Country gal.
5 ft. 3inch, 102 lb., petite
but her faith is
embedded a billon
feet deep!
She worked her butt off
that last Winter,
supported herself
Dylon-n-U.
U continually called
her lazy slob
in front of Dylon-n-Tyler,
oh God!
Now both u guys
might as well
get it right
'cause judge want like
these odds.
Alright!
She works three jobs now
to bye her home
and supports Dylon!
Give it up boys
Jesus will deal with you
It's time to follow your own crooked rules!
You can't luv your son's
and toture eagerly their mom!
Luv don't work this way
so pay attention to what I
say!
Shape up now 'cause
next time judge's gonna
hear it all!
Daddy deer listen here!
Watch out 'cause
perfect luv has no fear!
Yeah, God!
Dee is very strong in-luv
but these guys can't handle
that muck!
Give it up boys 'cause
my baby girl ain't
no toy!
Your own in-securities
will eventually tear
you down. It once
happened to me,
a clown, see?
Hardness of heart tis
it's own disguise
will some day open your eyes!
written to my ex son-in law Dennis
Sonny Geiger: Dylonns dad
© Emy Star
01 Sept 2003
To:Dee my youngest daughter,
my grand son's
Tyler Krakauskie age 5
Dylon Geiger 4 in Febuary
Copyright ©
emystar
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2004-01-29 09:13:27]
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Re: DADDY DEER
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 10:06:37 AM AEST
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| Well I have to two step daughters that we never see due to the fact of the mother! My husbands hurt over it So I know this poem well! Great write! Christina |
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Re: DADDY DEER
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by ygraine_17 on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 10:20:02 AM AEST
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| i found this poem to be tear renching - obviously this is a terrible time you and your family are living and I extend my warm wishes, but this read was great. Small and quick stanzas gave a whirlwind speed to it, much like life is. Hope you continue your great writing. |
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Re: DADDY DEER
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by venkat on
Friday, 30th January 2004 @ 04:38:04 AM AEST
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| seems venting very emotional and truthful you are..A powerful write. venkat |
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Re: DADDY DEER
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by 13Hopes on
Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 07:35:15 AM AEST
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My Friend,
It is truly a shame when the people like this, cowards, get to see thier children, they truly do not deserve the happiness that children, when there are parents that have done nothing wrong and do not get to see thier own little people... A very heart felt poem, thank you...
Cheers,
#13
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Re: DADDY DEER
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 4th February 2004 @ 04:27:51 PM AEST
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Powerful and painful...
Jenni |
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